The Loom and the Lathe

More Otter! Otter has a small fan-club -- I think I know all five members personally -- so they should be pleased.

This is another attempt at Chapter One, the first chapter featuring the main character, Otter. You might want to read the prolog -- it's an important prolog. And if you're curious you can get a glimpse at what might happen next by reading an earlier attempt at Chapter One.

I say might happen, because I don't plan my plots, I flounder a long, usually writing things out of order, until things come together. Or not. In this case I know quite a bit about the culture I'm creating, but about the people and the plot, it's the same old process letting the pen take over. In the section below, for instance, I found to my surprise that Otter had brothers. I had intended to give her escapades there.

I'm energized about Otter just now, but I'm not sure how or even if I'll put more of it here. I do (as mentioned) usually write out of order, and I'm not sure if that's interesting to readers, or just confusing and frustrating.

Anyway, here's "The Loom and the Lathe," Chapter One of Sorrow's Knot (a working title from the days when Otter's name was Sorrow). I will probably move it to its own yellow page soon.
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Otter lay on her back beneath shifting coloured threads. Above her the copper bracelet on the weaver's wrist flashed and the shuttle flickered. The wood frame of the
loom clacketed around her. Fragments of wool slanted down through the dancing light. She pressed a finger under her nose and swallowed a sneeze.

She'd ducked under the loom at the beginning of the weaving lesson, when Master Cricket was trying to free three small children who were caught up in their yarns like fish in a net, flopping and giggling. She was beginning to regret it.

She couldn't hear Cricket's lesson above rattle and hiss of the loom, but it didn't matter. She was almost old enough to be prenticed, but it wouldn't be as a weaver. No one was going to trust Willow's daughter with yarns. But while missing the lesson was no trouble, getting caught missing the lesson would be.

To one side, she could see Master Cricket's robe dragging in the packed dirt of the tent floor. One of his soft boots was torn a little, a toe poked out. He shifted from foot to foot as he taught. On the other side a thicket of spindles wound with coloured yarns were stuck into the earth. In front of her were the weaver's feet in their beaded moccasins. Behind her cold damp seeped under the tent edge and down her neck. Fenced in like a sheep. She tucked her skinny arms and legs up like a grasshopper and shifted her head on a rolled up hanging, considering.

She was bored with the slow growth of the pattern shifting above her. And Fawn would surely miss her soon -- Fawn was always on the alert for a chance to turn her in.

A small knife flashed through the pattern and a bit of yarn snaked down into Otter's face. The yarn was miss-dyed, a blotchy red and pink, trimmed as scrap. And no wonder: there wasn't a trace of power in it. Otter twisted it around her fingers thought: distraction.

     Red for will
     Yellow for skill
     Silver's a barrier
     Wisdom is green
     Grey for the power of going unseen

But before she got further cold slap of air and light hit her. The tent behind had come loose from its pins -- no, it was being lifted. She craned her neck backward and got an upside-down glimpse of the ribbon ward, its white birches like streaks of light.

Then the tent wall dropped. She turned her head. Three pairs of feet were almost at her nose, mud-splashed heavy boots, smelling of moss and pine needles, green and grey leggings, a long knife sheathed on a hip, the bottom of a long bow held loosely: Rangers.

The tent filled with hush.

A voice she didn't know -- an old woman's voice, she thought -- murmured: "Master Cricket, it's time."

"Is it," Cricket rasped, "is it?" It was so quiet she could hear him rub his hands together. "Children, I need you to -- " he stopped. "Where's Otter?"

Otter tensed. The Rangers were only inches away, and the spindles still had her fenced in. But behind her the tent was unpinned. The bottom of it moved like a sidewinder in the cold April wind. Otter gathered herself, and rolled.

Put even as she pulled away, fingers pinched her ear. Otter yelped. One of the Rangers was stooping; suddenly they were nose to nose. The old woman smiled. "Here, I think. Come out, now, child." She tugged the ear and Otter came scrambling out and puffing to her feet. The woman plucked another bit of scrap yarn from her dusty, tangled curls. "Otter," she said, and nodded as if to an equal.

Otter saw Fawn thin her lips in outrage.

Fawn was a graceful fourteen year old with a chickadee cap of black hair, cut short because her mother had recently died. She was the oldest of the unprenticed children. That, and the glamour of having a dead mother, made the others look to her. Only Otter could rival her: only a little younger, a lot taller, and a lot more trouble, which meant more fun.

And Otter had more dead.

Twin brothers had toddled and tumbled at her feet like wolf cubs. And one day they had vanished as if her mother had swallowed them whole. And then her mother had swung around from the empty bed and caught Otter in her eyes. Those eyes shone like the northern lights: strange green shifting across darkness. Otter ran.

Otter dashed into the carpenter's shop almost by chance. Her aunt Alder was kicking the lathe up to speed. Alder looked up at Otter, and came around the table without pausing to break the flywheel. She was at the door in time to block Willow. Otter kept backing up.

"She's mine," said Willow, her face stark.

Alder looked at Willow for a long moment. The hiss of the lathe winding down filled the silence.

"No," said Alder. She quoted the Green Book: "No gain without a loss."

"I have lost!" Willow cried. And then, almost keening: "What have I lost!"

Alder just stood there, filling the door.

Willow spun and ran across the common. Every tent flap filled with wide eyes.

Otter found herself crouching in the curls of pale wood under the lathe table.. Alder crouched to her. "Come out, now, Otter� Otter, don't --"

"Otter." Another pinch to her ear brought her out of the memory. "Don't think of that just now," the old woman said. Her voice was soft. Her long fingers had made a quick knot of the yarn she'd plucked from Otter's hair, a knot Otter hadn't seen before. The thread was white.

     White for memory
     Orange against dread
     Blue for the power of binding the dead

"Children," Master Cricket nodded to the old woman -- almost bowed to her. "This is Mother Thistle. She's going to take us into the forest. We will go now. We will be silent."

3 Comments

crystallyn said:

oooo I’m so excited that you are working on this again. Sorrow’s Knot was one of the initial pieces that I read when I first came to your site all those months ago and quite honestly, that was what hooked me.

Can’t wait till I have a space of time to read this in full!!! :)

Eric said:

oooo from me too! I love it!

DrMeglet said:

yay! More Otter (with her hidden name that she keeps to herself, or maybe her mother named her that: Sorrow, my theory anyway). I’m real psyched that you’re back into this. Here’s hoping your pen has lots more. If it’s soon, I’m happy, if it’s not, I guess I can cope.

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