Revelation (revised, again)

Listen: I am going to tell you something.
You will not repeat it. You will be lucky
even to survive. When I speak, your heart
will catch like a match. When I speak your pulse
turn to a tide. When I speak your ears
will hold all human words, like a wood full of birds,
they cry "lonely, lonely." When you hear, your back
will arch like the sky. You will call like the thunder:
"bones, come together. Bones, take your order."
Be still. Your words
are code for breath. They cannot make
the stones bleed water, or set the sun
ablaze past colour. I am the word
that made the clay curl up in fingers.
How can you answer? Be still
and I will make an oak of you. Be still
and I will put a bolt through you
and turn your lungs to hands of lightning.
Do not be frightened. You have wanted
wings. An end to death. (Remember,
I have walked as pulse and skin. I know
what you long for.) Be still
and I will turn your ribs to wings,
your sternum to the keel
of a bird, a deep bone
to anchor silence. Come, open
your mouth. Let me put my book
on your tongue: a stone, a coin, a wafer.
Become salt. Savour.

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While it doesn't quite count as an epigram, it wouldn't hurt to read the "eat the book" weird bits of the Bible, such as Ezekiel 3, or Revelations 10. Rev 10 is also the source of the title and epigram to Seal Up the Thunder.

My very slow brain has finally caught up to the root of "Revelation," "to remove the veil." That's Latinate, of course. From the Greek, the equivalent is apo- + kalyptein, un- + covering. Apocalypse.

Thinking the ending should maybe go:


    ........... Be still
    and I will turn your ribs to wings,
    your breastbone to the keel
    of a bird: a deep cord
    to anchor silence. Come, open
    your mouth. I will put my book
    on your tongue: a stone, a word, a wafer.
    Become salt. Savour.

But I'm done tinkering for now. Time to put it away for a while. Striking while the iron is hot can get things bent out of shape.

8 Comments

Katy said:

Jeez. How do you do taht?

Erin said:

Lots of practice, regular doses of Mass, a moderate amount of brain damage, and a willingness to lose control.

pat bow said:

It gets better and better.

O said:

Just loaned my copy of Ghost Maps to a friend.

a) I hope I get it back

b) I hope they enjoy it enough to buy their own copy

c) either way another person is reading your work and that’s what matters.

O

Erin said:

O — Does that mean you’ve finished it?!

sb said:

this isn’t a book one finishes

Pat Bow said:

For Ghost Maps, Erin was doing revisions right into the pageproofs stage!

Erin said:

What — that’s not normal? I also have new versions written in the margins of my reading copy.

I only meant, Owen is the only person I know who read Ghost Maps really, really slowly. I’ve been curious to know how it reads if you do it like that.

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