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laterns
hung in black branches:
winter apples

2 Comments

Erin said:

Or possibly

lanterns hung in black branches: winter apples

Getting stuck for hours over a linebreak is a poet’s pitfall. I think it’s probably even more pointless than usual when it comes to haiku.

pat said:

Nice. But how about “lanterns”?

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