daffodil haiku
ducklings --
smaller than
the daffodils
....
in a bank of daffodils
one
red tulip
....
forsythia
dandelions
daffodils
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ducklings --
smaller than
the daffodils
....
in a bank of daffodils
one
red tulip
....
forsythia
dandelions
daffodils
I really like the middle one, it evokes a strong image, and I like the flow.
I liked this! I can see it quite clearly
Paging Erin - are you out there, Erin? I miss your weblog.